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Reviews For: Like Fish in the Water

Rose Warne
2008-06-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseDa- /ang/. That is rather unnerving.

I agree, it would be all the better to expand upon this chapter/story, since you left your readers hanging, wondering what monstrosity is swimming to Baltimore. I guess I'll have to use my imagination... Maybe that's what you planned?

Oh, and good job with the gore. The whole crab theme on that one guy was very original.

The deadpan narrator made it slightly commical (or maybe I'm just being morbid): "Addonizio knew nothing, and is now seeing a therapist thrice a week." Good, bad, I don't know! but it's funny to me, and it's a unique angle for a horror piece!
Victoria Starr
2007-10-26
ch 1,
abuseI know it's been a couple years since you wrote this, and probably don't intend to keep going with it, but I read the one review and I was like, "Aw."
It didn't suck. It was interesting and well written. :)
Haha
2007-02-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseHaha, you suck.
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