Okay, just in case I didn't already say this, it is amzing and wonderful in all the horrible ways that make this story awesome. You already know why it's good and what's wrong with it, so I won't bother with that stuff.I tip my preverbial hat to you and that story. Oh, and you need to publish it. Someday.

Wow...O_O I've read a lot of "abuse" stories but yours dragged me in. I love the format and the plot! Talent shows =) There are some small grammar problems, but I can't be one to complain about that xD I could see why it won Grand Champion. Congrats! -adds story to faves-~Ob