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| atreyu love 2008-03-07 ch 1,  | abusehaha. kenneth sounds cute :) |
| SilentWhispers00 2008-02-25 ch 2, | abuseHeh I like this story a lot so far. Have you read the Vampire Kisses series?!? I love those books! |
| femmevampire 2007-10-21 ch 2, | abusei love it write more |
| WizardsGirl 2007-07-28 ch 2, | abuseNice, though you could describe the charectors abit more, it would help us reader visualize them. And you're not continueing? (Pouts, then sighs) Oh well. I'll get over it...lol! Srry, Drama Qween= ME!! |
| WizardsGirl 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseVERY nice beginning!! GO VAMPIRES lol!! |
| InfiniteRain141 2007-07-10 ch 2, | abusexD i am totally a sucker when it comes to vampire stories...please keep updating!! |
| Blackangle2011 2007-06-24 ch 2, | abuseUpdate soon |
| estrela jem 2006-09-23 ch 2, | abuseuh oh that's not good for lilina! lol This story is very very interesting and I really hope you continue it! You're doing an awsome job so you shouldn't stop, just try making them longer! lol I guess that's what everyone says though! |
| Rosemarine 2006-09-12 ch 1, | abuseIt's like a little trip to extacy, something dark and seductive we know we should not go. Something about this story tugs at the heart strings of human nature. |
| simply me 2006-07-26 ch 2, anon. | abuseah! you cant just leave me hanging out there! its...its...ILLEGAL!please please please update this as soon as humanly possible!...no pun intended...ha ha...but really! this is great and i need more! |
| iced-faerie 2006-06-26 ch 2, | abuseGreat story you got here! I can't wait until the next chapter! |
| FyreFaerie14 2006-06-25 ch 2, | abuseyay, new chappie. it wasn't as bad as you thought it was...but it definitely could use some improvement. like more description. i still am enjoying it thouhg...you know me, anything involving vampires... fyrefaerie |
| Summerslight 2006-06-24 ch 2, anon. | abuseNice job, yes i do agree this was way to short, more details are needed to help with making Lilina's motive and what she feels more convincible. |
| Zzub Yearlight 2006-06-24 ch 2, | abuseis she really gonna try and kill hi? and why did he choose to turn her to turn her into a vampire? and why do people want to attack him? who is kenneth really that he just decises to watch her and then one day turn her into a vamp? this is a really god chapter. please cntinue to write this story i think it will be really good if you keep going with it. please update soon. |
| abc123 chewy 2006-06-17 ch 1, | abuseit sounds pretty good so far. i can't wait for an update |