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AppLEaves
2006-04-06
ch 3,
abuseA! B! C! D?

I should start counting numbers if I'm not going to get any smarter.

Anyway, somehow, I really really liked the part, [...morbid, elementary fascination...]. I just can't accept the fact that I can't write out an exact feeling into words like others do. And you make me wanna pull my hair out. Not really. But I envy you. ALOT.

Makes me remember when I just stood there and stared at this orange juice stain on my shirt for ten whole minutes. I was a freaky kinda cool, back then. Now, it's just freaky.

Sorry for the babbling. And yay. At least you're trying. Meaning: see me. I just posted something for the first time in MONTHS. (Lots of ecstatic screaming.)

Anyway... A! B! C! (POST) D! (too).

That wasn't very subtle.

-Apple
xanthofile
2006-04-04
ch 3,
abuseyou know, you could have mentioned being...you...way before this. makes me feel horrible and all. really low.

or maybe it's the fic? nah. i like the...moving back and forth between past and present. good. ah. no words are coming to me at the moment. sorry.
AppLEaves
2006-03-28
ch 2,
abuseSOMEONE (big big big on emphasis)IS BACK!

And with another angsty fic to cry along with.

I'd go on and on and on about this fic and your (OMG, I can't stop gasping!) return(!). But I have this fic to edit. Which I haven't done in about four months total. So yeah. You make me wanna update.

-Apple
Graphi
2006-02-27
ch 2, anon.
abuseBeautiful sweetheart. I don't have this song, but I know I can find it. *huggles* I'm glad you started writing again. I think I need to do that as well.

Heh, it's funny how reading your stuff makes me want to write more again.
Satanic-Cupid
2006-02-27
ch 2, anon.
abuseOoh angsty. i like. You update fast.
beinedhiel
2006-02-27
ch 1,
abuserather short... but you writing more, aren't you? Good so far...
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