 Dust Cloud 2006-08-24 . chapter 1Again, thank you so much for your review, so here's one in return! xD
Loved the chapter. I love the first-person imagery, since I think the first person viewpoint is the hardest, and you did it effortlessly.
P.S. Stop lurking! xD
P.P.S. It probably was a bad idea to put your full name at the top of the chapter. Just a thought, you know there a lots of psychos on the Internet.
Thanks again!
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