for a few simple words it has a deep meaning and it is very true, kudos.

True! Great flow. Nicely done. Hey, I sent ya an invite to a new site, fun and clean. Its called I Hear Chatter. Hope ya come join me an other writers from here. Keep up the awesome work.

I like this one too, it made my mind elaborate on my views of religion somewhat. All within 10 seconds =P. Good Job.

Very strong imagery.

Effective! Nice work. Write on!

~Anna~