The first two lines are my favourite they're very powerful. Keep up the great work!

You describe your insecurities well. Hang in there and in some ways go with the flow, be open to others and find out who you like and don't and hang out with those you do like (if you can). This was good.

*cheers* WOW I KNOW THIS!

Awesome work..really...a great poem...so simple and yet it carries such a dark message...well done (review me sumtime)