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| milady424 2006-11-10 ch 1, | abusedelighful and easy to understand, there is nothing better than a non complicated love poem about complicated love (not sure if that even make sence) Superbe(sp?)! Ml "Many men go fishing all of their lives without knowing that it is not fish they are after." -Henry David Thoreau |
| NationChild 2006-03-17 ch 1, | abuseI think that this poem is very touching but sad. It is very well written. |
| Cool-Ruzz 2006-02-28 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, great poem. I'm kinda confuse though, this is sorta about unrequited love right? I think so, anyway, I loved how you wrote it. Its amazing. Hey, if you'll got the time, do review my work. |
| Jezsh 2006-02-28 ch 1, | abuseI like the way the way you've outlined the situation here. Looking at other people, looking away, looking at each other, glancing back again...I like the delicate way it's written.Something that puzzled me though was it's lack of rhyme in the first part and the last two stanzas rhyming. Personally I think it should be either one of the other, because I found the sudden rhyme odd, but each to their ownAnyway other than that I really liked this :) |