Reading the last line made me go AW. It's touching.:) And the end of the previous chapter was poignant. Whisking her off so abruptly to England did make the reader [me!:D] feel the disbelief and...subtle sense of.. loss Qingdan was feeling. I liked it.

And then the end of the last chapter...it left readers hanging with delicious anticipation. And wistfulness and wonder and hope. Which is a good thing, since it's more romantic than letting readers know right out.

I like the local flavour. Though it's a bit weird how they talk in perfect English. xD But no matter, that's fine.

Oh I do wish the black coated stranger was Xiyu! ^^

The repetition of "oh Xiyu" did work.

Like I said, I think you should compress the chapters. There seem to be..lots of gaps, so it would be lovely *hints* if you could fill them in.^^

But the story was written excellently, very nice pacing, the characters came alive. And you said it wasn't good!!^^ But fill in the gaps!! Please? Hehe.

Keep writing.:D

You know you really should try to fill in the gaps. It was a little diorientating reading the first parts coz they'd just met...well in the last chapter at least.^^

Qingdan sounds a lot like you heh. You know what? I think you should just put everything into one long shot. Then at least it won't feel so broken up.

I really hope Qingdan agrees to perfom in later chapters. She being very mean and bu4 shou3 xing4 yong4 here. xD

Update again soon!:D

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Xiyu indeed. Lol. Is his English name - if he does have one - going to start with 'P' too?^^

Haha it's so easily identified with. I liked that bit about the X and Y chromosomes!:D Oh, and those two are not going to end up together are they...? xDD Qingdan sounds like you! Haha sneaky author manifestation!!

Okay yes I'm waiting for the next chapter!^^

I thought it was pretty good. Not the most amazing thing, but I can say I liked it. Good job, and keep up the good work.