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CrimsonSoulTears 5/21/06 . chapter 1wow that end line is so deep. dunno wat it means but wow! i also lv these lines Twice the age of a little two, For you feel it to you feel their sadness,And what you feel is called utter gladness,(SO deep) Bright green eyes with specks of yellow, but y do u keep puttin capitals and commas? thas not rite punctuashon. |