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merrymowmow 2006-10-04 ch 15,	abuseI haven't read the other 2. I'll have to that.
merrymowmow 2006-09-21 ch 14,	abuseI was wondering when you're going to update ' Something To Say'
Anani Moose 2006-06-13 ch 12,	abuseIs the short story I haven't read the A.I.D.S. one? Even random people got to read that! Am I less to you than a random people? Geez. Anyway...I thought Thaddy was nine when Parker started his abuse, not four...four is really young...isn't it EXCITING?! I have my own name again!! Anyway...I don't think I like this chapter, because you make Parker seem so nice I almost feel sorry for him (almost!) and you make Birdie into more of a perfect guy. Good luck on finding a place of inspiration!
Anani Moose 2006-06-04 ch 11,	abuseOoh, what's the shock of my life? I wanna know! Are you gonna come in with a shaved head or something, or tell me your going out with Mike again, or that girl who likes you? I WANNA KNOW!! pout By the way, I think we should see things from Rae's point of view sometime...or at least have Thaddy say "it seemed like she was thinking..."...I want to know what was going through her mind when she was talking to her mother.
Anani Moose 2006-05-30 ch 10,	abuseUmm...yeah, what you said a couple chapters ago about the Moose hating you...I would but I don't have the heart...interesting plot twists...though I didn't quite follow the sentence about stuffing one of Gaki's bras with socks, because I thought you were in a different dimension...anyway...Thad's life isn't better than yours, you've got Joel (who's gorgeous) and ME! your MOOSE!! Birdie is not just your gay version of Jason, he's your gay drunk (GROSS)smoker version...anyway...you posing on a piano...I'm not even gonna touch that one. No comment. So what is "you know what?" because I don't know...
Anani Moose 2006-04-18 ch 6,	abuseI don't like the whole dating scene, but that's because I don't like reading about uncomfortable social situations where people don't know what to say and are always on the brink of an argument or awkward silence...they just freak me out. So anyway, now that my criticisms over...and it wasn't even constructive, just a pet peeve, really...I need to re-read the first couple chapters b/c I think I forgot a couple things...you should make one of those character bio things to look at while you're reading to make sure you know who everyone is...anyway, Even though there are two Birdies, there's only one who's...even remotely tolerable! (And that would be Jason...and he's more than remotely tolerable, he's wonderful.) But the Bird freak in this story is just irritating. So yeah, I still think Thaddy should marry some nice women...doesn't even have to be Marie...and finish college and live happily with his wife and kids and Mr. Winks. Or he should die. One or the other. MUWAHAHAHA! I'm so merciless.
fuzzy-logik21 2006-03-21 ch 4,	abuseYES! he remembers. lol. nice update. james is kinda subtle, maybe a little too subtle. oh, i don't know. well good job.
Anani Moose 2006-03-17 ch 4,	abuseIs Stacy going to become a more permanant character or was she just sorta in there? I think she should become the perfect, sweet girl that Thad marries. And just to tie it all together and make it cute she should have a cat named Mr. Winks before she even meets Thad. But I guess that's too perfect and happy for one of your stories. Golden-green eyes? Nice! Though I'm personally a fan of grey eyes, grey like the sea before a storm (Princess Bride)...anyway...They cut Thaddy's hair?! Sniff I love long hair on guys...well, not like, butt-long, but not a buzz cut (eww) either. What James says to Thaddy sounds like something I'd say...or..."well, that's...interesting..."
Chel 2006-03-17 ch 3, anon.	abuseNICE story Toki... i dont normally read ** like this but it was pretty good for the 3rd chapter. nice job.
fuzzy-logik21 2006-03-13 ch 3,	abuseStrange. I know you're not done... I think. Anywho, I like it.
W3DNESDAY 2006-03-12 ch 1,	abuseoo nice ending. i love the dialogue at the end. lots of subtext and character development there i think. lol now i have to go read the first part of Thad's story! toodles!
Anani Moose 2006-03-08 ch 3,	abuseYeah. Blood. THUMP haha, just kidding, I haven't passed out yet...maybe cause I sorta just skimmed that part...anyway...who'd you get blown off by? I'm sorry that you feel like **. You sound totally...I don't know what...ARE YOU OK?! Should I call you? It's too late and I don't know where your number is! AH! ARE YOU OK?! P.S. you're not stupid
Anani Moose 2006-03-03 ch 2,	abuseAn update all for me? I feel so special! You're bringing something for me to read?! YAY!! Wow, you're really into swearing today...random observation...anyway...You need to update Broken Wings...I don't care if you're stuck or not. Notice I didn't poke you though...or was that no-poking agreement only for February? I think it was...POKE! MUWAHAHAHAHA!
Anani Moose 2006-02-28 ch 1,	abuseYay! I like this story. I tend to mistrust James just because he's so nice. Giving Thad a room and everything for nothing. That's not typically done nowadays, so it makes it seem like he's got alterior motives...which I don't think you mean him to...so you might want to have him mention a reason that he's so nice or something. Or is it because he likes dogs? Wow, I suspect someone's an antagonist just because they're nice. Is that sad or what? What's the world coming to? Ok, anyway...I thought Birdie wasn't gay. And I thought Thad was...and what part of Birdie's life is this? And are you going to update this more? Wasn't this going to be a play? Never knew Micro II class could be so productive...sorry about all the questions...teehee, I loved your Halloween costume...

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