|Reviews for Discontent|
| vitriolicvermilion 12/8/09 . chapter 1
Oh god. This is written with such emotion and insight that I wonder if the author has been in Myra's situation.
It's relateable from the point of view of both characters, and it's also desperately sad from the point of view of both characters. Am I supposed to hate Myra because she can't accept Shelley as she is, or identify with her? Am I supposed to hate Shelley for not taking care of herself, or identify with her because she's not good enough for her partner? It raises interesting questions and an unsettling commentary onto who we are. In other words, it was thought-provoking and sad, and I liked it immensely.
| Kushe Gothel 1/31/09 . chapter 1
Is she having an affaire or something with her yoga teacher?
| write25 6/12/06 . chapter 1
oh this was beautiful. i wasnt really sure what to expect in the end, but i like what you did. great job on this. mariah
| Kyria Asimi 3/12/06 . chapter 1
I feel bad for Shelley, not so much Myra. But, it is a sad story and too bad Shelley's being led on.
| Livinlife2dream 3/9/06 . chapter 1
This is very intreting but personally I hate the name "Dora" it's so * but besides the name "dora" this story is a keeper. _*
| a lonely september 3/2/06 . chapter 1
this is like my biggest fear. i hardly ever read fiction so feel special. i really like this. the reality hurts.
| none of burt's beeswax 3/2/06 . chapter 1
Very nice descriptions & details (such as the drop of sweat between Dora's breasts). Very tasteful. You have a real mastery of language.
| Venustas iaceo 3/1/06 . chapter 1
Discontent indeed. The narrator seems a little shallow to me, though. Eh. It's a sad story.
I think I feel worse for Shelley.
| Sketchor 2/28/06 . chapter 1
A nice little slice-of-life piece and pretty sad (the emotional kind, not the pathetic kind!). When love's flame becomes dying embers, it's always a sad experience. So good job!
| Lightning Storm 2/28/06 . chapter 1
I really liked this story. Poor Shelley. Myra should tell her how she feels, but everyone knows its easier sad than done.
| RandoMaia 2/28/06 . chapter 1
Hmm... I like! I think the ending is really good, and I get into Myra's head, you describe her thoughts well. Nice job _