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| xo-lilacsxandxlolita-ox 2006-05-05 ch 1,  | abuseHey, I wanted to thank you for the review that you left on Uprising Thanatos, and I would also like to thank you for notifying me of the plagirism that has been going on. I appreciate that you took the time to tell me about it ^^ Anyways, from what I see here, I think that this is a wonderfully written story that is portrayed with sophistication and balance between narrative and characters. I have to say you repeat the names a little too much, but that's nothing major, just a minor thing that I noted, and this thing does not at all detract from the reading experience, since I have a delightful satisfaction after reading this. I would like to thank you for the nice read, and I will try to look out for you in the future. chibichocobo |
| nekopunkprincess 2006-03-02 ch 1, | abuseYay! There's actually a story in the manga section that has more relation to manga than gay Japanese boys having sex! Amazing. I didn't think anyone had enough capability to write something like that. (Uh... insert evil laughter?)The story sounds pretty cute so far; I like how it's going. Hmm. There has to be a catch to this little dolly somewhere, but for now it just seems like an adorable little story of friendship/fun/getting into trouble. Your grammar is pretty good, and that's sadly a rare sight on this... site. But how come it's rated M? It seems just like a cute little-kidish story. I like it, but I just don't get the rating. Maybe it comes later. >> Or you just picked a random one. Well, off my rambling and back to the critique, I hope you write more to this. It's cute. |
| Daughter-of-Louis 2006-03-01 ch 1, | abuseUmm..what kind of question is that--possibly because i'm making it into a comic pretty soon? Just because it doesn't have japanese names in it doesn't mean it can't be in this section. Just think of all the stories that don't take place in Japan. Stories in this section are usually just stories that can be made into comics and just because the main character of my story isn't like Hikaru or Yuki or Tsukino or Momo or any other japanese name doesn't mean that I can't make it into a comic...eh whatever I'm wasting my breath trying to explain this. |
| ronsha 2006-03-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhy is this is in the Manga section? Just asking. |