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painted.music
2007-06-11
ch 1,
abusekonichi wa

I agree one hundred percent with this poem. My cousin is being sent to Iraq in a couple of weeks for twelve months, and I'm hating Bush right now for doing this. He's tearing people from their families for no purpose! The only reason we're trying to fix Iraq is because we broke it in the first place. Even if it wasn't clear before that we need to stop, I think it's slightly obvious now!

Lovely poem -- added to favorites
-Shan-
ittybittytreefrog
2006-05-21
ch 1,
abuseGreat! You're a talented rhymer. I love talented rhymers.
topaz07
2006-04-21
ch 1,
abuseI'm...in tears practically after reading this. I agree completely. My fiance was in the Air Force and living each day not knowing if he was to live or to die but to much. Thank for you this.
BranwenEithne
2006-03-01
ch 1,
abuseNicely written!

I don't know if it was right to go to war in the first place but now that we're there I don't think we can just pull out. It's a fragile situation as it is and some stucture is needed for a time until a government that can handle the issues of the country is stable.

gah sorry for the politics ^.^
Winter Reflections
2006-03-01
ch 1,
abusei completely agree! very well written and it has a good flow.

keep writing!

Monkey
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