beauty in the simplisity. And it is a simple design with simple words for being so complicated of a subject.

well done


--Prophet--

This poem confused me a bit,though I liked the first stanza.Good job.=)

I love the repitition of this poem. I feel that I can relate to this, but it does require the read to think a bit, which it good.

Keep it up.

not quite sure I really get it but I think I do... this is going to take some contemplation, but even on the surface it looks and sounds and feels very good.

Nice poem, once again. However, I think that you should try to describe your poems in the summary...it would be nice. Obviously you can write, then you would have it there.