I love the despairity at the end. This is a very interesting and beautifully written poem.

The emotions in this...Wow, I love the message in this, the hope that comes from this.

keep it up.

very interesting. the first time that I read it I actually thought of it as suicide but once you get past the major theme, you see the idea behind it... reall awesomely played out

I love the message conveyed!

~xoxo~