Powerful... Simply powerful well done

Very powerful and emotional. I love it.

I like the way that you started and ended the poem, the way that you put it as your title. The middle was very well done as well.

Keep it up.

yet another excellent poem. I commend your artistic ability and the theme of this was... well, it was well-played out and I really got a feel for it. not so much rhyming which I like, and it shows a very well-constructed idea

Great poem! I loved its structure and depth, write on-

Obsidian eyes

Nicely writen. A tough topic, but you did well.