Hey Girl. You are so amazing at Poetry. I'm so Jealous. You are my best friend and I love you.

Ouch. I would love to know why you hate this person, because I almost wish that I hated someone like that so that I could write something like this about my hatred for them, just as you have done here. That was one messed-up sentence. Oh, and I would also love watching this person reading this poem, and then have someone tell them that they're the subject.

I LOVE the cantaloupe part. I will now paste it here, because I love it.

"And open up their heads

Like cantaloupe

But bloodier

Shriller

And with less seeds"

Tee Hee. That makes me so happy. Oh, and I also really enjoyed the licking the paws clean of fun part. This poem makes me want a cat, but my mom's allergic. damn.

-Wily Wind

Hehe, thank yeh both. Oh Saph, honey, he DOES deserve to die. ZC doesn't, he's just a huge pain in my **, but THIS guy can go jump off a cliff. I'll even give him directions!

I know who the poem's about, but not personally, so I'm not sure if I think he should die or not. Like ZC. Great peom, though.

i know how you feel. i love the way this is written. very well thought out, as well. and the cantalope part made me laugh. great poem, one of my favourites!