I have no excuse; it's been far too long since I've checked over here. Forgive me, 'Manda! (It's Emily, btw.)

I rather liked this; the progression of the year in terms of the progression of a day was particularly effective. Showed the relativity and mutability of time. Coolness. The only cc I have is that the sparkle/twinkle thing got a little old towards the end; I can definitely understand why you put it in each phase of the poem (symmetry and all that jazz) but it just wasn't working for me at the last. Just my opinion, though. ~_^

Em

Aww, I fell sorry for Him.And Yes you can put my one poem on your site.