|Reviews for Michael|
| fantasybookworm2012 1/1/13 . chapter 1
Or the people in charge realize how desensitize the human race can become. Yeah right. I liked the first chapter. Though I don't fully understand what's going on. I found your story through a forum so yeah.
| Blackdawn-70631 6/8/10 . chapter 30
Nice! Michael is back!
| Blackdawn-70631 6/8/10 . chapter 28
Whoa! Talk about a creepy chapter!
| Blackdawn-70631 2/22/10 . chapter 27
I love how this was put together, definatly a twist from the normal gemues of water when this focuses on air/flying. The description of Haruka is very beautiful, you should try to draw her, would be nice to see a sketch at least.
| Blackdawn-70631 11/16/09 . chapter 20
A sweet little lovely dovey chapter here, next one sounds like it's going to be a strange one. I like the very beginning of this chapter the most of all.
| Blackdawn-70631 10/16/09 . chapter 19
Awesome, nice to read Michael in the water.
| Blackdawn-70631 10/10/09 . chapter 18
Sweet chapter here, looking forward to the next one.
| Blackdawn-70631 9/15/09 . chapter 16
Now this was a nice chapter, loved the humor! You know I'm looking forward to that next chap.
| Blackdawn-70631 9/6/09 . chapter 15
Poor Michael, maybe he'll get back to a normal life shortly later.
| Blackdawn-70631 8/20/09 . chapter 14
Excellent chapter here, lots of emotion and drama with just the right amount of violence, I even liked how the violence was balance for this type of rating, not too little and too much, just right.
| Danielle Gin 7/29/09 . chapter 1
This is certainly an interesting start to the story. You handle the train of thought point of view pretty well. But you did have some grammar and punctuation errors that you should take a look at. Also, I'm a little confused. The story's title is "The Micheal Anthologies," but an anthology is a collection of short stories by different authors, usually over a similar topic or theme. This seems like more of a novel. It's a very misleading title.
| jaguar003 6/11/09 . chapter 10
I enjoyed reading the past ten chapters of this story. I love the issue of different species of humans living together, and the bias and the different levels of tolerance. It's somewhat similar to that in our human world, over different kinds of people. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Please update soon.
| Larry King 4/9/09 . chapter 1
I have to say that the characterization is amazing. I judge good writing by the ability to see the characters in my mind and that all there actions flow like a spring. The story is engaging and it has the quality that I love in fiction, it is entertaining.
| Darwin 1/11/08 . chapter 1
To ASHES and all of my other Michael fans. I just wanted to say I have not given up on this story. I know it has been a long time since the last update, and I apologize. I can only say that I haven't written but one new thing in the past several months. Most of the updating you have seen is from Only Half and it is only because I pulled it down and started editing the chapters to read better. I've mulled the next step to this story every day since I posted the last chapter, but my muse has been denying me the connection I need to move ahead.
Part of it is that I think I've written myself into a corner...and I'm not sure how to get myself out...YET! LOL! I'm still working it, trust me. Maybe this weekend will be the time.
Thank you in advance for your patience. I do appreciate it.
| ashes 1/11/08 . chapter 24
Maybe the lack of feedback has to do with the lack of updating. No offence, but it's been well over a month again. I understand writers block, but for the sake of all those who love this story please tell us whether or not you will be taking a break from this. Love the story, maybe you could develop the relationship between cory and many a bit more?