A sweet little lovely dovey chapter here, next one sounds like it's going to be a strange one. I like the very beginning of this chapter the most of all.

Awesome, nice to read Michael in the water.

Sweet chapter here, looking forward to the next one.

Now this was a nice chapter, loved the humor! You know I'm looking forward to that next chap.

Poor Michael, maybe he'll get back to a normal life shortly later.

Excellent chapter here, lots of emotion and drama with just the right amount of violence, I even liked how the violence was balance for this type of rating, not too little and too much, just right.

This is certainly an interesting start to the story. You handle the train of thought point of view pretty well. But you did have some grammar and punctuation errors that you should take a look at. Also, I'm a little confused. The story's title is "The Micheal Anthologies," but an anthology is a collection of short stories by different authors, usually over a similar topic or theme. This seems like more of a novel. It's a very misleading title.

I enjoyed reading the past ten chapters of this story. I love the issue of different species of humans living together, and the bias and the different levels of tolerance. It's somewhat similar to that in our human world, over different kinds of people. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Please update soon.

I have to say that the characterization is amazing. I judge good writing by the ability to see the characters in my mind and that all there actions flow like a spring. The story is engaging and it has the quality that I love in fiction, it is entertaining.

To ASHES and all of my other Michael fans. I just wanted to say I have not given up on this story. I know it has been a long time since the last update, and I apologize. I can only say that I haven't written but one new thing in the past several months. Most of the updating you have seen is from Only Half and it is only because I pulled it down and started editing the chapters to read better. I've mulled the next step to this story every day since I posted the last chapter, but my muse has been denying me the connection I need to move ahead.

Part of it is that I think I've written myself into a corner...and I'm not sure how to get myself out...YET! LOL! I'm still working it, trust me. Maybe this weekend will be the time.

Thank you in advance for your patience. I do appreciate it.

Maybe the lack of feedback has to do with the lack of updating. No offence, but it's been well over a month again. I understand writers block, but for the sake of all those who love this story please tell us whether or not you will be taking a break from this. Love the story, maybe you could develop the relationship between cory and many a bit more?

man that's scary! Poor Michael. Even though I know (like he does) that it's not right to feel that way about Haruka, I know how he feels. I'm not sure how I'd react in that situation either. Hope you get the bug to write more soon! ^_^

I love the story, but would it kill you to update at least once in a couple of months?

Yay! Thanks for updating. Michael was a bit of an ass towards the end, but then most guys are ;) I'm glad he's home and I hope he gets even better soon. I want to see more of him and Mandy too :P

Yay i'm glad that michael has woken up, I hope he's not hard on Haruka, (I think i spelt that alright). I hope he makes a full recovery...