 star blanket river child 2006-03-15 . chapter 1Woah... crazy images. "He stroked chalk like it was sex." Perfection, there. Brilliant way to put it. I also loved "And then I ask him. Teacher..., why are you smiling? I'm only learning" Fantastic. I liked the format a lot, too. It did slightly creep me out because it was so sinister, but it was sexy at the same time, and written beautifully, so I adore it. Awesome work, never stop writing. |