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| QueSeraSera 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. It has a funny concept, and I like what you did with the characters. But the ending doesn't seem like an ending... Or am I just no familiar enough with the Bible? Hmm. To me, it seems as though the ending of the story is very abrupt. Yes, it is a funny punchline for the setup that you have provided, but it seems as though the story should continue. Just an opinion, and you can ignore it as you wish. Thanks for reviewing by the way, and sorry if the poem was a little puerile, but I did write it back when I was what? 12? Yeah. =) Happy writing. |
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 2006-09-15 ch 1, | abuseHeehee. Very funny. It made me laugh. Which is, I have admit, sort of a hard thing to do.Thanks so much for reviewing my attempt to write a haiku!~Rowan~ |
| Jerian 2006-09-05 ch 1, | abuse*giggles* Funny. The disclaimer in the beginning is as hilarious as the rest. |