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KaronePrincess
2006-09-27
ch 5,
abuseHi Eosophorus, I'm KaronePrincess from fictionpress. I'm so sorry for the late reply...school plays a major time..you know...*sigh*...

I just found out that it's Marc...Vince's brother...sorry if I'm got the name wrong in the previously review..I was typing and have to remember the name from the top of my head so didn't got that right.

This chapter is really good...I was laughing at the part when Vince teleporting with Marc...Marc's stomach got air-out and need-to-catch-up...that's funny..^_^..he couldn't teleport himself just yet...oh he's going feel uncomfortable whenever he's teleporting...sorry for him...

Yeah..Rose finally went to the Sanctuary, but the site was horrible...Aw...the Sanctuary got burned..everthing...the Trinum is DEAD?...how?...I thought they're powerful...you know...

I'm glad that Rose heal Vince and Marc..but Mac...*sniff*...he's DEAD!...oh...I guess he must have been battle hard with the enemy.

Speaking of the enemies...how do they be able to get the Sanctuary burned without the Trinum or other guardians detect them?...I'm so curious.

Thanks for posting the chapter...and please..PLEASE...continue updating the story...thanks!...^_^
KaronePrincess
2006-09-25
ch 4,
abuseHi Eosphorus! I'm KaronePrincess from fictionpress. Sorry the lare reply..so busy lately.

Why did the council need Rose, Vince, and Mac? I feel sorry for them. They always be needed so they can protect others guardians...but about their life?? I guess being a guardian is not that easy.

Oh...it's hard for Vince...he have to figure out the riddles without knowing when it's coming or where to find it...that's hard...can the council give more informations?? (that's would be a big helpful ^_^)

Vince has no problem of convincing Mac to go and becomming a guardian, but he sure having a lot of problems of convincing Rose. I can understand her mind. She's tired of it.

Aw...Vince made a strong mind that he'll go on with the mission and he left Rose if she not coming with him. I thought He really loves her..I guess this is between mission and a person that you love.

I always find out Mac is a funny character. Even when he's talking to his own brother, "haven't you heard of knocking? I do believe it's in the dictionary under 'K'"...hahaha that's funny and cute.

Just curious, Mac and Vince, they look alike so how Rose figure them apart? I guess she did, but how? ^_^!! And when Vince said, "Fine, don't marry me, but save the world. Otherwise there won't be a world left to get married in."..I know this part is supposed to be intensed, but I can't stop laughinh...it's so cute and funny.

Please update the story more! Please! I really want to read more.
Enchantress-In-The-Dark
2006-09-11
ch 5,
abuseOwh sorry for the late review ya, I'm kinda banned from the comp but I happen to be good at sneaking! XD

O.O WAT?! You killed the Trinum and the guardians...? and most of all, Mac? *sobs* How could you? *throws chair* LOL I'm kinda dramatic lately...

Cliffiehanger...update soon and I mean SOON!
Chloee Phantom
2006-08-28
ch 5, anon.
abuseSorry. But I'm just too lazy to sign in. Sad, I know, but very true. Especially with school starting. All my energy has been sucked away. Oh well. So...that was depressing. I think I might cry. You better update soon! And now I'm off to read Romancing Nadia!!

Chloee Phantom
Enchantress-In-The-Dark
2006-06-24
ch 4,
abuseOMG What happened to rose and vince in this chappy...Really really serious... i didn't expect the "fine, don't marry me then" answer from vince O.O You really need to update soon!! Haha, the bickering for the last chappy ish still childish! XD
Chloee Phantom
2006-06-20
ch 4,
abuseYAY! A CHLOEE PHANTOM PILLOW FIGHT! SHE CANNOT WAIT! I is so excited. *starts jumping around the room and humming Phantom of the Opera happily* HA! NO ONE SHALL BEAT THE ALL POWERFUL CHLOEE PHANTOM! MWHAhAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! About Vince...he's being very mean to his girlfriend. And I'm mad at him. VERY mad at him. So...you need ideas?!??!? Okay...you should have Vince and ROse get married because they think they're going to die and then they somehow survive! That would be cool. Then in order to make Rose help him, VInce could show her some helpless humans having fun (HAVING A PILLOW FIGHT!) and ask her if she'll just let them die for no reason! Okay...I guess I should let everyone else have a turn at telling you what should happen...but it's YOUR story! So...HAVE FUN WITH IT! Just don't make Rose or VInce die. MAKE THE TRINUM die! Hehe!! I don't heart them right how. Well...I shall let you go for now. Until the next update (WHICH BETTER BE SOON!)...

Chloee PHantom
Alenor
2006-04-02
ch 3,
abusehmm...ok then. fair enough, cya later.
Enchantress-In-The-Dark
2006-03-25
ch 3,
abuseThe bickering part is just totally hilarious! Finally things are getting dramatic XD Jz kidding... Aw.. one whole chapter but still havent really said what the Trinum wants... Stop this pain! You can end it by updating it soon!
Talyn Gray
2006-03-19
ch 3,
abuseYay for woman Trinum member! Boo for stupid men!

hehe, nice job on the children bit. ;D what are their names gonna be? Rovin and... Vinro ;D hey... I actually like Rovin... *takes notes*
Talyn Gray
2006-03-19
ch 2,
abuseHuman.

hehe, xD oh how I do love marc-y poo. ;D Gotta say I love his childishnesseses
Talyn Gray
2006-03-19
ch 1,
abuse*stabs trinum* :D
Chloee Phantom
2006-03-19
ch 3,
abuseA PILLOW FIGHT! CHLOEE WANTS TO HAVE ONE! WHY DIDN'T THEY INVITE CHLOEE! THAT'S VERY MEAN OF THEM! AND BECAUSE OF THEIR MEANESS, THEY MUST DIE! *Cires* I want to have a pillow fight! It's not fair. Vince isn't being very nice. He won't talk to his girlfriend. Tsk tsk. UPDATE! But next time there's a pillow fight, can Chloee participate?

Chloee Phantom
KaronePrincess
2006-03-17
ch 3,
abuseHa-haa I just love Marc and Rose arguing together. It's so humor. Vince called them "children" aw...that's funny and sweet in some ways.

Rose and Vince have mission to do. They always have things to do, uh. I guess that's what it is like to be guardian.

Thanks!

Update more!!

KaronePrincess
KaronePrincess
2006-03-17
ch 2,
abuseHi Eosphorus,

Yes, the chapter is humor Marc is funny. He not always agree with Rose. I love whey they fight, it made me laughed.

Thanks for updating!

Update more!!

KaronePrincess
Alenor
2006-03-15
ch 2,
abusehmm...ok then. kinda a little childish of them...but being childish is always fun so it's understandable. cya later.
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