Interesting. Wonderful final line.

Wow, this is really nice. Again i'm amazed at your talent of picking the right words to bring out a small poem. Great stuff!

Aww, sweet, I loved the way you spelled beautiful. Keep it up.

"Be-a-YOU-tiful" is my new favorite word, you make the *word* beautiful. if that isn't talent then i don't know what 'talent' is.

* noelle

wow, really painted the image for me good work

keep writing!

Wonderful thought and expression. Some feelings it evokes:

Auburn sun's last ray,

Autumn fields waver and sway,

Austral cross,—Heart's fay.

(5,7,5)

Upon a hillock,

Nothing can sun's splendor block,—

& Heart's joy unlock.

(5,7,5)

Wind & tree flitter,

Shadows and sunshine glitter,

Sweet joys,—not bitter.

Unique, especially that intriguing word play in the first line.