|Reviews for Sunset|
| Moondog Dozier 3/5/06 . chapter 1
Interesting. Wonderful final line.
| ACCOUNT NO LONGER ACTIVE 1 3/5/06 . chapter 1
Wow, this is really nice. Again i'm amazed at your talent of picking the right words to bring out a small poem. Great stuff!
| Disturbing Enigma 3/3/06 . chapter 1
Aww, sweet, I loved the way you spelled beautiful. Keep it up.
| poetic abortion 3/3/06 . chapter 1
"Be-a-YOU-tiful" is my new favorite word, you make the *word* beautiful. if that isn't talent then i don't know what 'talent' is.
| mizu no kokoro 3/2/06 . chapter 1
wow, really painted the image for me good work
| Manuel Fajar 3/2/06 . chapter 1
Wonderful thought and expression. Some feelings it evokes:
Auburn sun's last ray,
Autumn fields waver and sway,
Austral cross,—Heart's fay.
Upon a hillock,
Nothing can sun's splendor block,—
& Heart's joy unlock.
Wind & tree flitter,
Shadows and sunshine glitter,
Sweet joys,—not bitter.
| Eirien 3/1/06 . chapter 1
Unique, especially that intriguing word play in the first line.