Ooh, clever format. I really like it. Maybe it'll actually make sense if I think about it enough. Ag! I kind of get it, though I'm probably wrong.

Ever so lovely. This is gorgeous!

The word damask has always been a favorite of mine, partly because it's little-known. This format is intriguing, the poem excellent.

kind of reminds me of great expectations, kinda.

at first i thought the summary said against denmark, that would have been interesting

cheers for dislexia, but we all are a bit anyway

Again, I love how you mess with the format to make a unique poem out of it. I think it helps with the feel. Keep it up!

interesting. You kind of assume that with time people learn to accept themselves but perhaps too much time just highlights all the lost possibilities. I find this interesting! Good work!