sorta like life, right? we only have one life, sort of like one moment, but then not really. Still remember me hopefully... Sorry for not reviewing sooner-last minute school projects and a recurring writer's block took up my time.

Anyways, I like this poem 'cause it reminds me of life. The details are vibrant, visionable (

a short moment captured so well. great imagery, keep writing!

Oh wow this is really good! Its really... I'm not sure of the word... empowering? Yep, I'm going with empowering. Great job on this.

lovely way to set up the tone the gentle breeze was beautiful

keep writing!