|Reviews for One Moment|
| cloud-shadows 5/12/06 . chapter 1
sorta like life, right? we only have one life, sort of like one moment, but then not really. Still remember me hopefully... Sorry for not reviewing sooner-last minute school projects and a recurring writer's block took up my time.
Anyways, I like this poem 'cause it reminds me of life. The details are vibrant, visionable (
| bright horizon splash 3/19/06 . chapter 1
a short moment captured so well. great imagery, keep writing!
| boys kiss girls 3/19/06 . chapter 1
Oh wow this is really good! Its really... I'm not sure of the word... empowering? Yep, I'm going with empowering. Great job on this.
| mizu no kokoro 3/2/06 . chapter 1
lovely way to set up the tone the gentle breeze was beautiful