Wow the imagery and description in this is god-damn amazing, just breath-taking.

that was the best extended metaphor ever...i love the anaology - so breathtaking and relatable.

Beautiful.

~j. lynn

i've never seen something this unique. my faves were the throat and eyes. everyone writes about eyes but your description was fantastic. not many write about throats and.. well. amazing. going into my faves. (:

Wow. This is super gorgeous and perfect. I would point out what I liked, but that would take forever, since I loved everything. The images, the way you use words, the metaphors...everything is divine. I am in love. I am favoriting this and you. Keep writing! :)

lovely, lovely.

the imagery is beautiful.

~* Noelle

oh god. fantastic, wonderful descriptions and the way you bold-ed the body part in question is fantastic. also the way you centered on things not usually considered "attractive" such as forearms. lovely.

Ooh . . . powerfully descriptive. I love it!! So glad I got a chance to read this one . . . I can't imagine what it's like read aloud . . . :shivers up and down spine: I really love it . . . An excellante job, and please continue!!

Thanks for the review . . . A trend: people either love or hate the repitition. I think it's necesarry, but that's just my opinion . . .

all my love,felicia

ah. i love the chest part! this is great work! the hair&eyes are also lovely. great vocabulary and no really repetative imagery. i love how it comes together to make the whole "song". very neat idea, great write.

Hm...the impact of this is visceral. I like the use of punctuation as a catalyst for your words. I can certainly see this meant to be read aloud or as a Spoken Word piece. Excellent.

Absolutely lovely dahling, I've favorited this. If I had to pick a favorite stanza it would be 'chest'. Simply wondrous.

georgie (formally Junkd)

Wow!! Very well-crafted. You have created a sculpture with words! Very creative.

Fully descriptive. I like how you broke this down into parts and individual sections. It really makes the whole work more complete. Well done.

ohmyGod. ** wow. that was amazing. i can't say anything else. soso amazing. gack. i wish i could write like this - mindblowing. so mindblowing. it's going on my fav stories list (eventhoughineverputanythingonthat) because it has to. hahh. wow.

~kait

holy.