another one that isn't my favourite. not that it's not great in its wording but...i don't know, just not my favourite (silly old me)

Just like you cannot

Command yourself to keep still

When everything else moves.-I think that’s such a powerful image; to want to stand still and everyone feels that way (very universally relatable) I think the theme of this piece is kind of floating around the ideals you express (I don‘t want to say pointless - cause in a way that‘s not true - but compared to the last one I read it, it does seem a bit unfocused.) Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.