|Reviews for things|
| emsworth 3/25/06 . chapter 1
another one that isn't my favourite. not that it's not great in its wording but...i don't know, just not my favourite (silly old me)
| Faithless Juliet 3/3/06 . chapter 1
Just like you cannot
Command yourself to keep still
When everything else moves.-I think that’s such a powerful image; to want to stand still and everyone feels that way (very universally relatable) I think the theme of this piece is kind of floating around the ideals you express (I don‘t want to say pointless - cause in a way that‘s not true - but compared to the last one I read it, it does seem a bit unfocused.) Keep up the good work.