Whoa! This was an extremley descriptive, well-written story...It was almost eerie at how it was so descriptive to the victim's feelings...

wow!

I liked it, sad though, but very realistic. Good luck God bless!

This ws really good,please continue.

One of my main critiques of this peice is all the "not feeling right" parts. I dont know about you, but if I was getting all those vibes about a guy I'd just call a cab, and would definately not allow him to stop at his place first. Also there are way too many stereotypical bits in it that dont always happen like the shirt part. I just dont think it seems realistic enough, and although I havent studied rape indepth, one of my ex best friends raped a close friend of his and ours, and gave me those bejeebers feelings when asking casually about sex one time, and I know, I was uncomfortable and got out of that situation as soon as possible.

very powerful, nicely written, and topped with a lovely twist at the end. Nice work