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| The Jet Black Hotel Mirror 2007-06-18 ch 1,  | abuseWoah. That was deep. |
| Fleur-de-lis Evans 2007-01-29 ch 4, anon. | abuse*speechless* |
| Fleur-de-lis Evans 2007-01-29 ch 3, anon. | abuseDo you write poetry? Or is this form a life experience. I'm just wondering because honestly it's really deep. - Fleur |
| Fleur-de-lis Evans 2007-01-29 ch 2, anon. | abuseI really love this story. I'm a romance person. I can't right romance to save my life. It really bugs me. Usually people say that reading enough of what you want to write can help you righ it, but everytime I try to write a romance scene it sounds cliche and stupid. Anyway, I love the last senctence. "How young I was, how naive, for that to be so exciting to me that was mistake number three." Anyway, like I said before you should write a transcript. This would make a really good novel. -Fleur |
| Fleur-de-lis Evans 2007-01-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey! It's me again! The girl from your other story. I realized that I should have checked out your profile page a long time ago. Anyway, I really realte to the last part: "This was mistake number two, and even looking back on it now when the chemicals ae gone and their effects are long since past, I'd make the same mistake over again, because I couldn't say no to thim then and I still can't; even though he seems to have forgotten me. Forgotten me competely, but I'll never froget, because I loved him." I have never been in that situaiton. I'm only 16, but I realte to it because I'm really in crush-love with this college freshmen. Anyway, I really like this last statement because I think that all girls who have or haven't made this mistake know what's its like to be hurt by a guy and never be able to forget it. By the way you should submit some of your stuff to a contest or keep some of it to yourself and write a transcript for a book. You're really good! - Fleur |
| Darkened Starlight 2006-10-25 ch 4, | abuseDeep. Very deep and very good. I liked it a lot, especially the metaphor analogy similie thing with erasers and messed up papers. |
| Lavender L. C 2006-08-24 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely LOVE your summary. I read it and I was like "O..." LOL Great Job |
| Helena Evangelist 2006-05-06 ch 1, | abuseSuch poetry in your writing. I like it a lot. I'd love to read more. -Miss Helena Black |