where is your update?

Hm, hurry up and get this piece going somewhere! I know it's gonna be real good once it gets goin, but right now I'm gettin sorta bored...and the stalker is scaring me...why can't i find some stranger to send me money? Will you send me money?? Eh? EH??!?!!

Yay! Stalkers! I'm going to take up the hobby of photography now...and not for my sick perverted stalker-ness...er...heh heh. Write on, my lesbian lover! ^^

ooh keep writing, ill add you to my favorite stories list to keep tabs. But yeah, keep writing and ill keep reading, its really interesting.

Ah! I want to know what happens good story, but I'm dieind here. If you could write longer chapters that'd be great too, but whatever makes you happy

This is a really good story so far, can't wait to see what happens it's a really interesting story.

it's definetely interesting yet a little weird, but it sounds like it's going to be good

I'm... in freakin' love w/ this story. xx I don't know why but it's so addicting... So I demand more! lol

~suppi

Ready for my asinine review? Alright let's do it!'ceiled' should be 'sealed' and I think 'complement' is the word you wanted to use instead of 'compliment' unless that's the context you wanted to use it in. and now, for everything else, I loved it! ^^, but isn't idiotic box more a proper term for the tv, since the internet is not actually the comp, but being projected through it? and why does all you're stories have siblings wanting to kill/abuse/hurt eachother? Not like i'm complaining, but i think you have some unresolved issues with your siblings expressing themselves on the screen...and did i mention i love this story and you? And for some reason i feel like i'm in full jackass mode...it's those damn juggalos in those damn forums! Love you and next chappie diddy mow!

wow. excellent. love it.

Hmm... very good!! I just think... wait never mind.

'S'what you get, i suppose...

Wow...such a violent ending, yet it leaves you hanging. Is there more? Extreamly well writen.