i don't really like the flow of this one... feels too choppy... seems you haven't added anything new in a while either... Do we all just grow out of it?

I'm not sure if I like this.. it's nicely written, but I feel like it needs more

Nicely written, good work! Write on!

Anna

I like the sound of it, and the last two lines are brilliant. However, I would like more background information, such as what exactly they think she did and how/if she can prove she's innocent.

But for a short little section, it's beautiful.