It was good, but it would have been cool for you to follow up on the ending. I'm glad you used poison though. I'm really not a fan of those overly gory and explicitly disgusting stories on the horror section. Keep up the good work.

hey i liked the story. short and sweet. and i liked the ill kill you, i kill you, killed u thing, it really flowed well, and made some suspense. and u set up the plot for the next one to. keep it up.