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| bahaghari 2006-03-04 ch 1, | abuseThat's sad... and hurts. For it's never easy forgetting someone who already marked his or her space in your heart... friends or lovers. I'm saying I can relate. Of course, not with its entirety. It's the three last lines. Keep writing. |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-03-03 ch 1, | abuseThe last line is powerful! Great Job! ~xoxo~ |