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bahaghari
2006-03-04
ch 1,
abuseThat's sad... and hurts. For it's never easy forgetting someone who already marked his or her space in your heart... friends or lovers. I'm saying I can relate. Of course, not with its entirety. It's the three last lines.

Keep writing.
Midnight Star Lights
2006-03-03
ch 1,
abuseThe last line is powerful! Great Job!

~xoxo~
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