The ending made me happy, but I suppose that was the point. I was really worried before.

Wow, great story, there aren't enough in second-person.

Heh. Anatomy has the same effect on me... anyway, lovely piece. There's more, yes?

I already posted a response on the LJ group, but I'll put another here, because I know it's nice to get reviews.

I loved it. It flowed very nicely, and was touching, and made me sort of hurty in the chestal region. But then, at the end, sort of not hurty.

If that makes any sense.

Keep it up!

Wow.. *sniff* I was trying so hard not to cry at times.. and then that ending was so cute & perfect! I love stories with morals. And I love stories written in second-person, it's awesome. And this was awesome. I loved it.