I've read this before...thought I reviewed. I guess I didn't. ah well...Wel it was great...you have a very good writing tallent. *wishes she had your writing tallent.* LOL...

Wow.. Impressive and pretty darn original! I really liked it. You have a really good writing talent, and I'd like to see more work by you. Keep it up!

It was a good story, but it seemed a little rushed at the end. It was good overall though.