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Reviews For:
weeping blue of starlight secrets
cornered.sensations
2006-03-14 . chapter 1
lovely imagery, 'a fireflies' choir', very pretty, great job!
a ribcage away
2006-03-04 . chapter 1
Wow, so majestically beautiful. "a fireflies’ choir of wings a-lifting" those lines were especially nice. I love the way the whole thing goes on without interception. Great job on making three lined stanzas and nice rhyme scheme. ~Snowglobe
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