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Stardust'n'Wanderlust 2006-03-04 . chapter 1
Cutting furrows\Like the plough in the field.\I will sow my sorrow\And my pain there,\Watch it blossom\Into a cure for this\Black abyss

I like the simile there, makes me visualize...*shiver and rub wrist*

I don't know how it feels like, so I won't judge you, but I hope you won't feel like doing that again!

(I know that sounds kind of nai`ve, :-D)
Nille 2006-03-04 . chapter 1
That sounds so...exact! You've really captured the feeling...I hope you wont do it again, though you'll feel like it!
Cheyenne Kai 2006-03-04 . chapter 1
powerful imagery
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