Very surreal, and for me, rather metaphorical. The dreamy, floating atmosphere of this is done quite nicely, and alas! the ending is almost tragic in its prosaicness.

Nicely done. Lovely ideas. :)

evocative.

"drifting", "sinking", "climbing", "set..down" - these actions feel like something is happening.

"for the fact" sounds awkward.

smooth, and effective ending.

Excellent imagery, really paints a vivid picture in your head.

Brilliant imagery!! And the contrast between dream and reality left that feeling of longing for the dreamscape. Bravo!! Encore!! Take a bow, you did good.

-Reni ^..^

good use of metaphor. i really like your poems. your writing style is really spontaneous and almost carefree. :)

This is excellent. I like how you write it like you're actually in a dream; not a single image in this poem is believable, but they are all incredibly beautiful. I like the "giant hand" at the end--perhaps this symbolizes a god or protector figure? Anyway, great poem.