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| Esette's Lovely Eyes 2008-07-21 ch 1,  | abuseIt is a really good story!! I love the concept of all dialogue... it worked well with the story. |
| mishiema 2008-07-13 ch 1, | abuseDear writer, You're amazing. Your writing makes me cry and this was written in ALL dialogue. Oh, favorites. |
| Rabendaryu 2008-07-13 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was one of the most amazing things I've read on this site, ever. I love the pauses and the way you described everything with out ever really describing anything. |
| RoseLife 2008-07-11 ch 1, | abusevery adorable!! i loved the plot incredibly original ^.^ and also well done on writting it all in dialogue! :D |
| Tetelestai 2008-06-22 ch 1, | abuseRead it, so I'm reviewing it. :) haha I LOVE this rather long short story. I first read it because I saw how many reviews it got (honestly, how many one-shots have over 100 reviews? haha). But anyways, the writing style (pretty much all dialogue) was amazingg. Very unique and you pulled it off really well! I love how you managed to convey plot and imagery and.. EVERYTHING in here. The name Widgeon has grown on me and I'm now going to name my future daughter 'Widgeon'. or maybe not... but yes, excellent job! |
| ani 2008-06-22 ch 1, anon. | abuselove love loved it this story is terrific. Loved it. |
| nerdz 2008-06-20 ch 1, | abusei could say a lot of things, but i think i'm going to stick with one: wow. oh, and maybe i'll add a "p.s." right here to say sorry for being sleepy and using absolutely no capital letters xD |
| cup of glee and sparkles 2008-06-14 ch 1, | abuseThis story is so incredibly sweet. The characters seem so real, and honest, and just... it's great. |
| Kjersti 2008-04-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love it. :) It was absolutely great. (Man, you're way younger than me and still write tons better... *sigh*) The writing style is so different from that other one-shot, but both are just amazing. Great work! :) |
| Eunoia 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abusewah! you nailed it! it so god! really... |
| Elle Winters 9 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abusewow this is a terrific story. i really really like it. its short, cute and sweet. i don't think i've actuli read a story this short before and liked it quite this much. nice work. am going to read through some of your other stories good luck with the rest of ur writing. |
| AOK 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this, even if it took me a little while to realize it. I love how you managed to write this well without much description at all--it's very successful and adds mystery. :) Courtney is such an amazing character...Wonderful job! |
| everybodyloveschocolate 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseI love the way you wrote this differently from most stories. It sorta brings a little charm to it. It's really beauitful too, the way she thinks she's helping him but its the other way around. I love the ending too, it completes the whole thing. You should do more stuff like this, its very, very good work. :) |
| YoungInside 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abusewow. i loved this. it was great. i haven't read something like this before. keep it up. (: |
| A.K.A. Writer's Block 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseuhm... i think it's amazingly sweet. i really, really do. --a.k.a. |