 hydrocancellation 2009-08-29 . chapter 1I read Moon River before this and I say, this is much light-hearted than Moon River. I really like this one. It's humourous. I think humour really cancels out the slightest dislike for angst(well, not that I dislike Moon River, actually I kinda like your style of writing for that one and added it to my favourites--the only angsty-filled shot there, mind you). I think your angsty-stories are the only ones I'm enjoying. Your fault for writing such nice stories. *mock fuming* Keep them stories coming. You deserve the thumbs-up's. I'm also adding this conversation-filled shot to my favourites. I think there's some typos like "al" which I assume should be "all" and other words I couldn't really remember, sorry! Anyhow, thanks for the enjoyable read. |
 toffeecakesxox. 2009-07-27 . chapter 1there is such a HUGE case of tension between the two, i'm surprised they didn't notice until Courtney left.
i absolutely love the dialogue!
wow, i don't think i'll ever be able to just write dialogue.
so, so cool. :D |
 Ainil 2009-07-24 . chapter 1 this is swet |
 chocolate chip.cookies 2009-07-21 . chapter 1gosh, that was great.
you know the part with the face in the window?
i saw a face in the window. i was so freaked out.
i think the fact that it was in your story made it scarier.
i love your writing :DD |
 Schyzotypal X 2009-07-14 . chapter 1This was sweet and I really liked how you only used dialog to tell the entire story. |
 If Jesus Rode A Dinosaur 2009-07-10 . chapter 1best ** oneshot i've ever read. |
 Little Silver Kitten 2009-07-04 . chapter 1Gosh, cutest story I have read ever~ Funny and awesome plot too. A definite must read in my list! |
 Menshi 2009-07-01 . chapter 1Gosh~ that was super duper kewl! Really funny and cute. I lurve Widgeon and Courtney |
 VTDark 2009-06-27 . chapter 1hehe. It's cute. :D |
 Silent City 2009-06-20 . chapter 1That's cute and stuff.
Enjoyed it...I did.
You're cool.
:) |
 annoyance 2009-06-17 . chapter 1I really loved this. |
 TheRoaringHush 2009-06-14 . chapter 1Oh my GOD this was an amazing story. Just to let you know, I have never commented on stories but this one was worth it. It was fantastic the way it was written in diologue and you STILL managed to bring out so much character developement and personality. Amazing! Keep writing! |
 Revel in the Night 2009-03-07 . chapter 1Perfect!
- Revel in the Night |
 wistfulXdreams 2009-02-20 . chapter 1*Dies laughing and happy* |
 Picasso's paintings kill 2009-01-31 . chapter 1 that was freaking AMAZING!!1 |