|Reviews for Capture Everything|
| eldrin 3/8/06 . chapter 1
You have a remarkable talent for expressing nature...I can't quite get over the vividity of the images. Seems very honest and real while filled with a hint of dreams.
| felicia13 3/6/06 . chapter 1
Hey! This one made me smile. I love the almost deceptively innocent tone to this piece. Another job well done! As always, good imagry and some excellent lines, like:
"pink butterflies have black/spots too" I like that one . . .
Why do you get so many reviews? You have a story from two days ago with 11 reviews. 11! What is wrong with you? Or better, what is wrong with me . . . Most of my poems have 3 reviews and yours have, like, 9 as an average . . . :sobs: I feel so unworthy . . .
all my love,felicia
| are you from mejico 3/5/06 . chapter 1
I thought I'd be confused but by the end I think I got this. Finger painting is really interesting imagry. So is painting as a metaphor. It feels like the narrator is capturing everything with photo-realism and making it into colors and feeling.
| Needa S 3/5/06 . chapter 1
| Aquafied 3/5/06 . chapter 1
While I'm painting in themountains, the rain begins,-it is amazing how rain makes thing so miserableand dangerous
yet we all still love it because it is so pure in itself.
| sunday night sky 3/5/06 . chapter 1
i think this is quite different to your other poems, it explores a different sort of theme. i really like it! i love 'slit the
clouds wide open and disect
the coming rain.' and the whole of the last stanza. great job!
| sloppy firsts 3/5/06 . chapter 1
The quiet rhyming in the first stanza was well done.
| bright horizon splash 3/4/06 . chapter 1
very beautiful poem, i love "as i fingerpaint my mind..." also the line about how pink butterflies have black spots too. nice job. *