You have a remarkable talent for expressing nature...I can't quite get over the vividity of the images. Seems very honest and real while filled with a hint of dreams.

Hey! This one made me smile. I love the almost deceptively innocent tone to this piece. Another job well done! As always, good imagry and some excellent lines, like:

"pink butterflies have black/spots too" I like that one . . .

Why do you get so many reviews? You have a story from two days ago with 11 reviews. 11! What is wrong with you? Or better, what is wrong with me . . . Most of my poems have 3 reviews and yours have, like, 9 as an average . . . :sobs: I feel so unworthy . . .

all my love,felicia

I thought I'd be confused but by the end I think I got this. Finger painting is really interesting imagry. So is painting as a metaphor. It feels like the narrator is capturing everything with photo-realism and making it into colors and feeling.

Beautifully done!

While I'm painting in themountains, the rain begins,-it is amazing how rain makes thing so miserableand dangerous

yet we all still love it because it is so pure in itself.

i think this is quite different to your other poems, it explores a different sort of theme. i really like it! i love 'slit the

clouds wide open and disect

the coming rain.' and the whole of the last stanza. great job!

The quiet rhyming in the first stanza was well done.

very beautiful poem, i love "as i fingerpaint my mind..." also the line about how pink butterflies have black spots too. nice job. *