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Fall Down
Sonnet Lacewing
2007-02-20 . chapter 1
Brilliant
sarramaks
2006-03-11 . chapter 1
I enjoyed the simplicity of this and particularly the rhythm, the lines "and you -" and "But now, yes" when contrasted with the lines next to them make me feel as if I am twirling. I enjoyed this.
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