This reminds me of a sunrise and the rarities you are able to see in life if you take a chance. beautiful

I'm always happy when haikus have something to do with nature and are good too. I feel like running outside now and tasting this dew.

I like it- especially the d's. One thing though, why is it called Chance?

One word: Nice _

Jade

i am hard pressed to find a single main street, but a vast amount

especially in the expense for happinessbut that costs around 60 dollars, as advertised

beautiful! what else can I say?

I like how it explores and notices all of these little mundane things that normally would just fade into the backdrop. Well done.

Much love,Juliet.

also very nice. very easy to read, very serene. i quite liked this. you have a skill with this form. i enjoyed the way you carried the letter 'd' throughout it. was it purposeful? it made it feel very solid and symmetrical.

so vivid, yet so simple and so beautiful.

quite a abstract hiaku nicely done

keep writing!

Very nice, excellent job.