|Reviews for Poetic Prideland|
| Niels Stegeman 2/5/07 . chapter 1
A beautiful visualization of poetry, simply breathtaking. Almost melancholy imagery makes this a beautiful poem. I commend you and thank you for all the reviews. Truly appreciated.
| Nobody-n-Particular 2/3/07 . chapter 3
Really like the nature motif, and the fierce presence of green and beauty.
| Nobody-n-Particular 2/3/07 . chapter 2
| Nobody-n-Particular 2/3/07 . chapter 1
Ah meaningful - speaks to my heart.
| WonderWing 1/29/07 . chapter 3
Loved these poems, so simple and understanding. No time is wasted with erroneous details as you deliver the reader directly to the attached emotion. Really vivid :D
| Moondog Dozier 5/23/06 . chapter 2
"a new step, twice forward", is marvelous phrase work. I like the use of "Moon vanishes", as I am partial to the moon, and it creates a sense of mystery in this work. Last line really gives this a great conclusion. Good work.
| Moondog Dozier 5/23/06 . chapter 1
I like the title and its use in the work. The interesting semi- contradiction of "For it belongs to us-but does not-because we are it and it is us", works so well to capture the situation. Excellent.
| boys kiss girls 3/9/06 . chapter 2
I like this one too. It reminds me of Rainer Maria Rilke's works. (Thats a good thing)
| boys kiss girls 3/9/06 . chapter 1
I like the formatting style. And... I take it you wear glasses? *high five*
| crazy dog events 3/4/06 . chapter 1
Mh. i would love to see more.
| Drops of Jewpiter 3/4/06 . chapter 1
great poem. i love the first line 'this poetic prideland' good job :)dropsofjewpiter