I didn't spot any mistakes...but maybe I was way too intrigued. This is...amazing. Like the writing style is so hardcore imagery and metaphors. I heart it so much...am I gushing...? I'll stop.

KEEP WRITING!

vampires! it's sth i gotta read. it was as if elegance and casual coloured in black.. anyhow i'll have to stick your story, it sounds really promissing.

this comes kinda late, but who gives?*lol*

Beautiful as always, and the mistakes are not so many(as I can count at least!).

And I soply adore the name Mikhail, wanna use it in a story too! I liked the boy...He sounds so beautifully melancholic to me. I wish I could write like you, beloved Chibi!

*hugglesnuggles*

You didnt make as many mistakes as probably think. This is a good beginning please continue