 Gypsee 2008-03-17 . chapter 1that was really good. very sad. I loved it |
 LeChem 2007-05-18 . chapter 1Wow. I'm not one to write poems but it is obvious that you are. I really like how it incorporates the inability to return to normal after a big change, which is something that probably happens to everyone at one point, and it was amazing the way you could put that into words.
Sorry if my review isn't very helpful at all or anything, but you're obviously much better skilled at writing than I am so there is nothing I could say to make this better. I'm just glad I took the time to read it... |
 NocturnalAntihero 2006-06-05 . chapter 1I spent a year in Germany...I appreciate the sentiments you expressed. Well written, thank you for the good grammar. |
 simpleplan13 2006-03-27 . chapter 1I like this.. the format is cool and it makes you think.. well done |
 die kleine maus 2006-03-26 . chapter 1reading this made me think, i don't know..i've been living between india and switzerland my whole life, and consider both a sort of "home".but i understand the feeling, and the way you portrayed it, with the simple questioning and narration made it an "incredible poem" |
 the-sandwhich-hugger 2006-03-05 . chapter 1WOW an intelligent poem made me think about how there is no english no more, just people that live in england.Also i had to go over this review just to check my grammer. thanks alot! |