Wow...i mean...wow, i can really feel the emotion put into this...anger, love confusion...wow, crazy. Just awesome, one of your best.

Liked the poem and the emotion it represents. The way love is so confusing and how you can love and hate someone at the same time. I loved it as always

aworkinprogress Daniel

P. ? ew but whatever :)

this one does have a very nice rhyme, and it's ketchy...not sure if that the type of affect you were hoping for.

i dont have anything against rhyming poetry, i just feel that this takes out the poetry and turns it to what i turn off the radio for.

i dislike rap, the emotion is gone there for me. it just repeats.

but this is good, just sort of displayed as a teen angst cycle, but slightly moving away from it

Wow a very powerful piece, very real. i can't really think of naything else to say i like it go u :)

Very good! Powerful piece and I know this feeling! Well done! V x

people'd be surprised to know that confusion sometimes conveys everything. mixed feelings and contradictions are really a fact of life. this is really honest. :)