Wow. Powerful. Is this part of a larger piece, or does it stand alone? Either way, I like it. Very nice.

By the way, thanks for the review. When you say, "the british army idnt include women soldgers during the second world war they were although they did have them in the air force navigating and and communicating." you're right. I probably should have used the word "military", which is what I meant, but I wrote "army". Chana Senesh (or Hannah Szenes, however you want to spell her name) was a paratrooper. (Does paratrooping count as the airforce? I am very uneducated in such things). But again, thanks for the review. ^.^

Keep writing!

That...was very good, a sort but powerful short story I enjoyed it greatly ^_^