 PamWTKA 2006-03-06 . chapter 1Whoa... really amazing. I want to read Animal Farm again! I like the rhyme and how you "repeat" some lines but changing some things... I can't remember the name of that literary device. Anyways, it reminded me of Funeral for a Friend.
I only found some mistakes in the first two lines: saved and sheep. Still, it's brilliant!
Pam |