I was not expecting to come across a review i wrote, but ye Gods, i hope it was the product of very late at night sleep deprivedness.
But i stand by what I said, and it's even more poignant having you as a friend for as long as I have.
You're very helpful ;)

*claps* Very nice. Love it.

It's a beautiful poem, and describes how I feel with one of my friends...who shall go unmentioned. I do want to understand and help them, but we're just too far away...Maybe someday though. Thank you so much for reviewing my (newest) story! And your wonderful critiques. I return reviews, just so you know. I'm hoping to find time to read your other works. Congrats on your success in the scholastic writing competition! (Is that just a local thing with you? If not, please e-mail me more info on it! I'd like to see if I could get something in there myself.) I myself cannot find any error in this poem, grammar/puncuation wise. And if an author twists words around for some reason, well, you can't really tell them it's wrong. In fictional works, everything goes. I think that's why I like it so much...Beautiful, beautiful poem...

Man, we would totally be best friends if we had been in the same grade. You are amazing. ^_^Just as an older-sisterly kind of thing, THey don't need you to understand, or want you to understand or try to fix it. They just want you to be there and say it's going to be okay. Trust me on this one, I've been on both sides.

thank you so much for this poem. i think it is perfect, and beautiful. i have a friend who's going through something big and difficult, and this basically sums up how i'm feeling with that. do you mind if i copy it and send it to him?

HI.

how pointless is this, since you are right next to me, but..er...4th, 5th, 7th stanzas=^_^

hi

I totally know this feeling... it sucks. =( I like this poem a lot though & I don't know how to improve on it.

I see know errors. this is honest, well written and a true understanding plead.It is noble of you too take your friends wrries to heart and want to help. i applaud you.

Oh my God, maia? What happened to your friend? Is she okay? Maybe she should see a psychiatrist if it's something really bad. I feel horrible for you too, one of my friends use to have really bad issues and she told me that I knew nothing about what she was feeling. But I did know, 'cause I was doing it to. Whatever, I'll talk to you later. Tell your friend to cheer up, as if that would help. Bye.

great poem. i love the line 'just some fleeting shadow of your pain' good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~